honestly i think it's gorgeous. i think the detail in the hand isn't up to the detail in the face, but maybe you were trying for that contrast? great narrative here as a standalone piece... i feel like she's been slain in someway... this beautiful flower now at the end of her cycle.
No, the hand is clearly shit, as everyone I've shown it to said that... and I already knew it. I've completely re drawn the entire page in a slightly different style, and I'm much more happy with it now.
I just have to draw the other [ages and color the whole damn thing. Ugh.
One thing I found odd though is that everything is very defined by the hard black line...except the lips. It definitely sets them off of the face but at the same time it seems off because they are the only thing without an outline of some sort. It leaves them feeling a little less defined than the rest.
One thing I really like is the tear running down into the black. Really cool.
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honestly i think it's gorgeous.
i think the detail in the hand isn't up to the detail in the face, but maybe you were trying for that contrast?
great narrative here as a standalone piece... i feel like she's been slain in someway... this beautiful flower now at the end of her cycle.
No, the hand is clearly shit, as everyone I've shown it to said that... and I already knew it. I've completely re drawn the entire page in a slightly different style, and I'm much more happy with it now.
I just have to draw the other [ages and color the whole damn thing. Ugh.
I like.
One thing I found odd though is that everything is very defined by the hard black line...except the lips. It definitely sets them off of the face but at the same time it seems off because they are the only thing without an outline of some sort. It leaves them feeling a little less defined than the rest.
One thing I really like is the tear running down into the black. Really cool.
Yeah, it didn't turn out as I planned in any respect. I like the concept, just not the execution.
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